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Fused

Postby sammy1977 » Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:50 pm

My brain is on a rollercoaster
Wired like an electric toaster

Its nerves go bang, fizz and pop
I wonder if it will ever stop

I am flooded by a sea of emotion
Thought impossible, waves in motion

I wonder if it can be fixed
Water and electricity do not mix
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Re: Fused

Postby shahw » Sat Mar 06, 2010 2:29 pm

Being Bipolar i get this - in my mania. It captured the mood well. Shah .X
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Re: Fused

Postby sammy1977 » Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:27 pm

Thanks, I'm not bi-polar but I was describing a period in my life where I had too much feeling that it flooded my brain so that I could not think straight, I was basically feeling traumatised, but if this is a common feeling for you, I salute you, I had difficulty going through it once, never mind in cycles.

Sam
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Re: Fused

Postby patrick » Wed Mar 24, 2010 12:20 pm

terrific fizz pop to this fits subject well thanks P
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